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With this ring......I'll be led
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With this ring......I'll be led |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
With this ring…….I’ll be led You’ve changed Of course! They always do You still love me And you think I love you too Hold out your hand Close your eyes A shimmering diamond To my shock and surprise How could you think I could even accept After breaking free Of the cage, where I was kept I’m no longer your slave and punching bag I gave away my ironing board And learned not to say “Yes, of course my Lord” Forget it! You, I will not wed Fate doesn’t lie With this ring…I’ll be led Marina Apr 2000 |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hello Marina --) Nothing like getting out some anger. Well done. Point was most definitely made -) Teresa King |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marina, will you stop beating around the bush and just come out and say what you mean?  LOL! Ouchies to someone! |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Marina - WOW! SLLLAM! Hope he gets the point. Very well-written poem!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Teresa. thank-you and I hope so. Balladeer, sorry...it's just I have such trouble saying what I mean..... Not in this lifetime! Troy, I think he may just get it this time. Marina |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ooooh! That's gotta hurt! You go girl Jeffreey |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Very nice poem just the same. "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Marina!!! This is great!! Way to go!! I can feel you taking charge here. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOH..scared of you Marina-girl  excellent declaration my friend... way to be...way to say (smile) take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jeffrey, thanks for the post and the support Whitenite, I woulnd't exactly say it's my view on marriage....perhaps just married to this person Sven, I'm trying to put myself back together and I needed to release some feelings that this person has obivouisly created in me. Thanks for your support my friend. You know that I appreciate it more then ever. Jm, you know me! I don't go quietly! Marina |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sometimes thats they way it makes us feel I suppose. Looking for treasures...found another one. Missing this poet too. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Come back to these stormy blue waters (y'know, Passions)!!! She said burn ... together. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well it's good that your eyes are wide open...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestMarina~ Haven't seen you here in much too long a time~ Missing you and thankful for the archives so I can read old friends~ Happy holidays sweet lady ... hope you are doing better~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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