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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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I deal in illusions--images of mind; see that world spinning over there? I created it--name it true; once it was a dime, flat/thin with only a ridged end to pierce reality as it once sat in the lines on the palm of my hand; staring with my mind’s eye through miniscule two-dimensional void ghostly mist--breathing in words infusion of new reality across the ancient silver lands; quick flick of wrist, toss in air immaculate world falls up into black star of invisible light, as my words release on a spin of dime flying through space and time created out of nothing— just illusion of my mind [This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady Noggins- Wow! This is truely beautiful. Welcome to the 'pub'. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep spinning those dimes.  -vlraynes (vicky) "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Hi Vicky, thanks for the warm welcome. I do have great fun with my silver dime worlds. Once I realized that I could create them, I spent a night in wonderous delight. Flicking them off into unknown tangents, dancing across space. Oh, by the way this trick only works with real silver dimes, don't try with the copper ones.  Lady Nogs |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady Nogs- Hi. Thanks for the advise. I love the way you make your words dance off the paper - or the computer screen. You havetrue talent. You keep flicking them, and I'll keep catching them.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is wonderful lady nogs! very well written..i hope to see more from you!! btw..i would not have realized you were talking actual dime here..had it not been for your above "conversation" with my buddy tricks! keep writing..and have fun with your illusions!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote: Vicky, what a lovely compliment, a wonderful way to start a day. dg, yes I do get a lot of enjoyment out of creating my illusions. And actually the silver dime concept has infiltrated several of my poems. Lady Nogs [This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow I like this, Lady Noggins! u portray illusions to be so magical and mysterious! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Silver dimes come in many forms, and if you roll the edge just far enough, 360 becomes a straight line. Loved the images! Evan |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
michelle, thanks dear, I have found the magic of creating worlds (illusions) with words, there is no hope for me now...lol, I love it. evan what a great idea! that is going in my notebook for future use. Thanks! Lady Nogs |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Wow yes, 'felt lifted up and taken on a wonderful spiritual journey by some mischevious fairy. Beautiful, I love this poem... |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Thanks for your comments allan very much apppreciated that you saw my silver dime world. Lady Nogs |
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