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Do I love her?
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Do I love her? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Do I love her? Here lies captured in fragile sleep, Raptures of a soul in reap. Eyes, would shade the moon to fair, A face t'would make an angel stare. Each sigh of breath, start to start, Is the rhythm of my heart. The precious seconds that fly bye, Are my everything and why. She is the magna and the core, All of this and much much more. A vision and my demigod, She is a gift, my gift from God. Perhaps there is a heavens dwell, Perhaps there is a soul as well. But not one seconds of her time Would I give up, till death claims mine. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Awwwww!! What I would give to be loved by someone so! You are a true romantic! (I won't tell  ) Beautiful, Sy. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfection lies deep in his soul, this muse from ages with gold, he lives to love, then shares with all the truths which before him fall. Absolutely beautiful, Sy! Thanks. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Seymour... if someone ever wrote those last 2 lines about me, I'd melt. *S* This is beautiful!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nice. Enjoyed. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ummm? Nope - don't think so... hehehe - j/k Beautiful as per usual.  K |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
whew, no kidding, gonna ditto suthern on that one, think I am gonna fall in love with a poet, I think I am due a good melting lol.....beautiful |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
La poesie, c'est exquise Somehow the French makes it sound more exquisite than exquisite, which is what this is Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, You will be *L* Sunshine, I can only give my humble thanks. Suthern, Just to you, That's the beginning Not the end. *L* Liz, If there was a way to say what you said, you said it well. I bow to the Queen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Truly, truly lovely thoughts. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Seymour, this is so lovely, it is such a testament to your love! Very well done! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such beautiful words of love Seymore |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So fortunate a soul is she The subject of your poetry Beautiful words Liz |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
What I wouldn't give to believe, that someone felt that way about me. Seymour this is by far my favorite... Uhhh...... so far that is. B Gravitt |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Absolutely breathtaking, Sy. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Good work, Sy. I wished that I could write someting as beautiful as that. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sy.....this is such a beautiful tribute to your love.....swept me away..(sigh) A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Truly, truly you make me blush. *L* Denice, Lovely and well done, I just placed you in my will. *L* Hoot, Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. *L* Liz, But you are a subject as well May perhaps in a different dwell. *L* Betty, So far is far enough for me. Thank you Tara, Absolutely Breathtaking, makes me blush. but it's nice to read. *L* Nate, Good work is all I ask, thank you. Sweet Pepper, Need I say more. *L* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Bringing this back one more time, Sy - cuz I love to see what a romantic you are.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, OK, there it is again. *L* |
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