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Toerag
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0 posted 1999-11-20 04:49 PM


May your sunset be of colors,
That enhance your day's-end pleasure,
May the day end with a happiness,
That is beyond all human measure.

God gives us glory all around,
His miracles are shown each day,
Whether the cry of a newborn child,
Or the colors in a rainbow displayed.

Miracles seem so common,
When you see Autumn leaves displayed,
Life starts out so innocent,
With a sunrise in colorful rays.

You can go down to the ocean,
See colors doubled on the horizon,
It will give you a Kodak moment,
And leave you breathless in your sighing.

Live each day as it may be,
The last you walk this earth,
Treasure God's earthly treasures,
Live life for all it's worth.

© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-20 04:51 PM


Now, Toe ... that is worth keeping in the Rolodex of memories.
Absolutely beautiful.
Enjoyed by this lady very, very much.

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Erynn Griffin
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2 posted 1999-11-20 04:52 PM


that is an awesome poem it is very true to heart...
Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-20 04:53 PM


This is beautiful, Toe! Simply beautiful!
I wish you the same!

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Denise


Marilyn
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4 posted 1999-11-20 05:32 PM


May your life be full of treasures,
But not all will be of pleasures.
For through hard times we learn lessons,
That turn fully into blessin's.
May you look back through your lifetime,


ok so I got stuck here!!..*sigh*...I did try though...lol.

I have had a small peek into who you are Buzz, and you are a gentle, kind soul. Thankyou for sharing your works with us and a small peek into the man you are.

Martie
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5 posted 1999-11-20 05:38 PM


Beautiful and sensitive Toe, just like you.
Julie
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6 posted 1999-11-20 06:56 PM


This was beautiful Toe! I knew you had this in you...this poem-a Kodak moment. Encore! Encore!
Pepper
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7 posted 1999-11-20 07:39 PM


Very beautiful Toe.....!!


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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 1999-11-20 07:48 PM


Toe...ya got me smiling here, not an easy task lately
Balladeer
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9 posted 1999-11-20 07:51 PM


Picture perfect, my friend.
WhtDove
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10 posted 1999-11-21 12:53 PM


Toe this was just excellent. Couldn't have said it better, cause you always do that! hehe...one to make ya think of what's important. Thanks Toe!
Sunshine
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11 posted 1999-11-21 07:45 AM


Ah, the serious side. Well done, kind Sir!
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 1999-11-21 12:17 PM


Toe,
This does not read like toe
That I used to know.
But I'll take a picture of that.
Good one Mr. Toe

Lucie
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13 posted 1999-11-21 01:26 PM


Oh Toerag.. this is lovely...the absolute best I have ever seen from you.
JOY 14
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14 posted 1999-11-21 02:58 PM


Pretty good, I must say. Wish I wrote it. Hee. Hee.
JTF
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15 posted 1999-11-22 05:19 AM


I'm not a believer but I cherish the beauty of Nature ... Great poem brudder ...

[This message has been edited by JTF (edited 11-22-1999).]

RainbowGirl
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16 posted 1999-11-22 06:34 AM


Toe: Beautiful..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Spring Heeled Jim
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17 posted 1999-11-22 06:37 AM


Don't know about the God idea but the poem was beautiful Toe.
Spring Heeled Jim
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18 posted 1999-11-22 06:37 AM


Don't know about the God idea but the poem was beautiful Toe.

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I got rythm when I bleed

Toerag
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19 posted 1999-11-22 06:41 AM


Thanks so much for all the nice replies....you are all so kind....
suthern
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20 posted 1999-11-22 07:20 AM


This is absolutely beautiful, dear friend... but you forgot to put your friendship in there as one of the most beautiful treasures in existence.... I hope it's a "moment" that lasts as long as the sun rises and sets. *S*

Thank you for this beautiful picture, sweetie... Kodak couldn't have captured the colors better than your words did!


[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-22-1999).]

Iloveit
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21 posted 1999-11-22 10:47 AM


*wink* betcha suthern thinks I am gonna ditto her ROFG.....
great poem toe...and yep have sighed many a time at the beauty that's out there, but I think the Kodak's we have in our minds are better than any we could get on film, thanks for the vision

Andrew Scott
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22 posted 1999-11-23 03:55 PM


Almost missed this one... well done Sir Toe.
lostboy
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23 posted 1999-11-23 04:04 PM


Cool Beans here TOE! I'm a HUGE rainbow fan and can picture this vividly.
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