Open Poetry #4 |
A Kodak Moment |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
May your sunset be of colors, That enhance your day's-end pleasure, May the day end with a happiness, That is beyond all human measure. God gives us glory all around, His miracles are shown each day, Whether the cry of a newborn child, Or the colors in a rainbow displayed. Miracles seem so common, When you see Autumn leaves displayed, Life starts out so innocent, With a sunrise in colorful rays. You can go down to the ocean, See colors doubled on the horizon, It will give you a Kodak moment, And leave you breathless in your sighing. Live each day as it may be, The last you walk this earth, Treasure God's earthly treasures, Live life for all it's worth. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Toe ... that is worth keeping in the Rolodex of memories. Absolutely beautiful. Enjoyed by this lady very, very much. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Erynn Griffin Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27San Angelo, TX United States |
that is an awesome poem it is very true to heart... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Toe! Simply beautiful! I wish you the same! ------------------ Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
May your life be full of treasures, But not all will be of pleasures. For through hard times we learn lessons, That turn fully into blessin's. May you look back through your lifetime, ok so I got stuck here!!..*sigh*...I did try though...lol. I have had a small peek into who you are Buzz, and you are a gentle, kind soul. Thankyou for sharing your works with us and a small peek into the man you are. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful and sensitive Toe, just like you. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
This was beautiful Toe! I knew you had this in you...this poem-a Kodak moment. Encore! Encore! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very beautiful Toe.....!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Toe...ya got me smiling here, not an easy task lately |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Picture perfect, my friend. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe this was just excellent. Couldn't have said it better, cause you always do that! hehe...one to make ya think of what's important. Thanks Toe! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, the serious side. Well done, kind Sir! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, This does not read like toe That I used to know. But I'll take a picture of that. Good one Mr. Toe |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh Toerag.. this is lovely...the absolute best I have ever seen from you. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Pretty good, I must say. Wish I wrote it. Hee. Hee. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I'm not a believer but I cherish the beauty of Nature ... Great poem brudder ... [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 11-22-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Toe: Beautiful.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Spring Heeled Jim Junior Member
since 1999-11-22
Posts 19Paris, Texas |
Don't know about the God idea but the poem was beautiful Toe. |
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Spring Heeled Jim Junior Member
since 1999-11-22
Posts 19Paris, Texas |
Don't know about the God idea but the poem was beautiful Toe. ------------------ On tops all I need I got rythm when I bleed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thanks so much for all the nice replies....you are all so kind.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely beautiful, dear friend... but you forgot to put your friendship in there as one of the most beautiful treasures in existence.... I hope it's a "moment" that lasts as long as the sun rises and sets. *S* Thank you for this beautiful picture, sweetie... Kodak couldn't have captured the colors better than your words did! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-22-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
*wink* betcha suthern thinks I am gonna ditto her ROFG..... great poem toe...and yep have sighed many a time at the beauty that's out there, but I think the Kodak's we have in our minds are better than any we could get on film, thanks for the vision |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Almost missed this one... well done Sir Toe. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Cool Beans here TOE! I'm a HUGE rainbow fan and can picture this vividly. |
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