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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. With a calm look My father fades Into the woods With a wave of his hand Saying son There’s good hunting here Follow me I’ll show you where . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminded me of the Six Feet Under series--in particular, the death of the character Nate, where he chooses to jump into the metaphorical ocean, symbolizing his death. You do write beautifully John. And since I seem to annoy you, I'll try to remain a silent reader from now on. But I did enjoy the poem. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
!!!!!! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both And SB you are wrong What currently annoys me is your failure to appreciate that the people that mean so much to me are already gone . . . so the looks of others don't matter. Thanks again John . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nodding. Understood now. Because I think I need to stop counting my "goodbyes" and start saying "hello" again. After all, there ARE a lot of empty chairs around. Much love and luck to you. |
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