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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2007-03-14 12:19 PM

i love my feet
or is it my shoes
for feet are a part
of me, while shoes are not

i love my shoes
or is it my path
for shoes only tread
where pathways lead

i love my path
or is it my destiny
for paths are only journeys
through the karma of time

i love my karma
or is it my feet
for karma can only lead
while feet live the life

conundrum of conundrums
life passes as i try to decide…
and my feet walk on

© Copyright 2007 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2007-03-14 12:39 PM

steavenr,
Yup, one foot in front of the other. Clever write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-03-14 03:41 AM

i love your poetry
or is it your mind
for your words simply
are the road map to your soul

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2007-03-14 08:54 AM

Wonderful, uplifting thoughts.

Thanks for the walk through your clever mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-03-14 10:27 AM

WOOHOOO! Yes! You took up the challenge and met it!
Plus you did both shoes and feet!

Please post your link in the challenge thread here.. /pip/Forum7/HTML/000720.html

Well done! Very well done!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2007-03-14 11:32 AM

Enchantress,
Sorry, but it was sheer coincidence. I didn't even know about the challenge until I followed your link.

I will post a link later when I get to a real computer.

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2007-03-14 12:55 PM

*snif ... snif*

I greatly enjoyed the aroma of this cleverly written piece full of riddles.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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