Open Poetry #40 |
. . . Betrayed by your eyes? |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
what if you said no should I continue or stop what does your heart say does it tell you to submit do your eyes betray your lips Inspired by: /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=96&topic=002659 Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I only pretend I'm not really hard to get you know me better ~*~ and when you kiss me my lips will proove me, liar stop means give me more ~*~ look here, in my eyes I live for your kiss, your touch please don't ever stop |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thats some lovely inspiration you have there Interloper, and this is beautiful. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Read my lips.. y..e...s.... Well done! In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
May I join my sister in giving you a ? Beautiful !! Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Look deep into my eyes and you will know the answer. You're not called Doctor Love for nothing! Love hug, EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful! I hope you recieve your answer. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
savy fingertips say, search inside this book find out the identity behind this quiet lake, and mold us into a timeless melody.... and if I should say no, well, you always knew how difficult it is for me to pretend... lovely inspiration you've placed there... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
And if a heart could speak things would always come across crystal clear. And even clearer if a heart could listen. Take Care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the way you put this. I read the inspiration for this also, and another impressive piece there. You 2 go well together. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah Doctor Love you know all and see all truth is always in the eyes yes? I love it! thank you sir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I see you've inspired yet another... Marvelous! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmm...mmm.. very nice, and I'm a good kisser too!! RDB |
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