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Balladeer
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0 posted 2005-07-03 07:58 AM


(to the tune of....aw, you know!)





There is a mouse in New Orleans
That's not surprising, hon
But it's been the ruin of Serenity's mind
And left the girl undone.

He loves to run all over
Taunts her with his tricks
And when he moves across her desk
He doesn't squeak - he clicks.

He shows her naked pictures
And teases her to death.
He doesn't stop his evil game
Until she's out of breath.

He brings all kinds of people
Into her room at night
He's ruined her tranquility
And laughs with wild delight.

So, people, just remember
This horrid tale I've spun.
Protect your house from Serenity's mouse
Or your carefree days are done.




© Copyright 2005 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 2005-07-03 08:02 AM


LOL Well done Sir! Now we're cooking!


And I love the mouse with his 'guy'...is that what they would be called? I Googled 'mouse' and all I got was computer mice!!


Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-07-03 09:38 AM


ROTFL....TOO MUCH!!!
Poet deVine
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3 posted 2005-07-03 09:40 AM


Perfect timing...there's an ad for a Mickey Mouse phone on top of the forum!! LOL
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4 posted 2005-07-03 09:49 AM


I love this and this brand new game you're playing.  Hope I'm not intruding.  Joyce
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5 posted 2005-07-03 10:17 AM


Deer Balls, thank you for the warning! Fortunately, my poody tat protects me from crazed mouses! ~ even those as be-witching as The Serene One's! ~ Mind you, it can be quite a battle at times!

Cat Vs Mouse

Loveya!
Linda
P.S. I enjoyed your humour which was impeccably  dished out ~ both rhythmically and in perfect rhyme!


Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2005-07-03 10:26 AM


LOL I almost choked in my milk.
Where on Earth do you find such animations.

This is going to be fun.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2005-07-03 05:39 PM


GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE



You--m'deer, are too cute and yep, the master. (It is okay if I call you, master? )






Kellie_Cantrell
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8 posted 2005-07-03 06:20 PM


hehe, that is pretty funny. Great fun this is.  
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Alicat
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10 posted 2005-07-03 07:24 PM


Hahahaha....good one, Balladeer!  One thing I don't want to think too hard on is where exactly that cord is connected.
SmartChick
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11 posted 2005-07-03 07:30 PM


Awwww Balladeer, this is a wonderful poem.
iliana
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12 posted 2005-07-05 09:34 PM


LOL........what have I been missing?
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