sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
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2005-07-03
12:30 PM
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It is a battle Of good verses evil Mice verses Cats I wonder who will win Such a battle
The mice evade the cat territory While the cat sleeps away They plan a way That the cat will go down And never forget the mice rule today
They take little lightsabers And cut the cats hair off As quietly as possible So the cat won't wake And make mice pie
Then they trade out the cats food And replace it with the dogs After they finish with that They pour liquor for the cat to drink Instead of water
For the final attack of the sleeping cat The mice tie the cats tail To the door So if anybody shuts it the cat will feel it And the mice will have had victory at last
But little did the mice know That the cat could sense what they did And when the mice went to hide The cat undid evething Everything that they had done
The cat knocked the liquor on the floor Poured out the dogs food in a planter Cut the string off his tail with his claw And said I shall live another day You lose mice. The only thing I lost was my fur
The mice come out of hiding and say We will fight you another day cat We will get our victory Us mice do not give up And they returned to their hole in the wall To plan another attack
Poetry is beauty in words.
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Joyce Johnson
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
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2005-07-03
12:34 PM
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I know they're cute and all of that But I am rooting for the cat. Joyce
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-07-03
12:50 PM
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What a tail! ~ I mean, "tale"! You have a mighty fertile imagination!
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
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2005-07-03
12:57 PM
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Shades of 'Star Wars' with the little light sabers! LOL
cute!
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2005-07-03
01:10 PM
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Ah this is SOOO cute!
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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
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2005-07-03
04:24 PM
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Lovely poem
TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow
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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
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2005-07-03
06:51 PM
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