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Irresistible Promise
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Irresistible Promise |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Irresistible Promise ~*~ Rarely comes ever love Assured in expectations Remitted from above Drumming, sweet vibrations I have choices, commitment voices diligently now The velvet space between two minds connects somehow That you will hear me, feel me, at your side and ever close Promise made No passing phase of sunset glaze, vigilant in heartfelt ways So full of thoughts containing wise, the flutter of unique surprise That you will feel me, hear me, at your side and ever close Rarely comes ever love Gently, the gravitations Remitted from above Lingers, sweet vibrations I am certain, cast the curtain call of virtue, so true the sound Desire’s fire burns, a touch that learns a landscape honor bound That you will hear me, feel me, at your side and ever close Promise kept I will ever love you Copyright Kkh 10/8/06 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
No words to express how lovely this is, Kathleen, really...well, maybe their are, but I don't have 'em. Much enjoyed. *hugs*...jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I read it several times it intrigues me but the words never came to tell you how much I like it... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ As ever ... a read from you is 'Irrestible'~ 'The velvet space between two minds connects somehow' Soft, soft sighs connecting here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD ~ I tend to whisper your poems because I like to hear them verbalized. They are music to the ears, heart, and soul. "The velvet space between two minds connects somehow" ~ Another TD memorable line!  Loving Light, EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
No passing phase of sunset glaze, vigilant in heartfelt ways So full of thoughts containing wise, the flutter of unique surprise That you will feel me, hear me, at your side and ever close This is ever so lovely and soft Kathleen, beautiful writing.  |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Another classic. Nice, memorable ideas and phrasings. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "The velvet space between two minds connects somehow" Yes, such touch is the most intimate and beautiful. A wonder of words you give to write it. |
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