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Open Poetry #39

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2006-10-07 05:32 PM

stay with me

even if you dont,

stay with me one day.

lets be together for a long time

in the great and beautiful thereafter.

lets dream together.

do the things that friends do.

lets have fun with it and chase the stars

lets be brilliant.

defy the world make it beautiful together

things, they happen for a reason.

things, they will change.

they always change.

i dont want to talk about it.

i'm not going to talk about it.

im not telling you anything yet.

not here.

live your life and love it. love it as much as i love you

leave me alone. stay away from me, you hear?

or talk to me.

i will try to listen. i wont listen well.

i want to be just like you, you know.

i want you to tell me everything.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2006-10-10 07:22 PM

I find this a delight and am shocked that no one else has responded, yet. I gladly push this back to the top.
Regards,
INclan

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-10-10 08:04 PM

I am glad this was brought back up. I enjoyed the flow of it, and thought the ending was fantastic. Nicely done EagleScorpion.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-10 09:10 PM

I enjoyed reading this..i really liked it.
Good Writing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-10-10 11:20 PM

I liked the feel of this
yep

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