Open Poetry #39 |
A poem from me |
ozlem Junior Member
since 2006-10-06
Posts 16 |
Life sharpens me I can bleed you Get away from me If you don't want to get hurt |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions I read this a few times... You portray this extremely well...enough to evoke a pause, even in the reader. Each cut that bleeds, empties a vast and endless place that fills again with the softness of loving tears. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
grabbed me by the heart ozlem welcome... |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
Well I too would like to welcome you. Somehow I missed your first post. A very good poem too. Simple and too the point. I hope to see more from you soon "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Welcome to passions. I read this shortly after you posted, and came back repeatedly to read it over. A reply was difficult to formulate, not because the work is lacking, for it is not. Standing on the page it is excellent. What gave me pause was the mindset that created the work. So now my comment. An excellent write that makes the reader THINK. I absolutely look forward to reading more of your work. Sandra |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It grinds on us all....and eventually you do take an edge..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ozlem Junior Member
since 2006-10-06
Posts 16 |
Thanks for your encouring comments. It was just a try. I wrote it on friday night because of an uneasy feeling i was caught up. |
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