Open Poetry #39 |
Autumn's Dance |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Autumn's Dance When autumn comes a dancing with her cool and gentle flow Bashfully the trees will blush as the winds begin to blow Her colored gown spreads softly o’er the woodlands as she twirls And the fallen leaves rise up on gusts to dance with her in swirls The heat of summer steps aside, the dancing floor to yield Her cool lips leave a frosty kiss on the pumpkins in the field Farmers gladly welcome her as she ripens all their crops As she dances ‘cross the meadows and o’er the mountaintops Gracefully she pirouettes in a colorful ballet Spreading bits of red and gold as she goes upon her way And as she finishes her dance and winter enters in The countryside will slumber as it waits for her again |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If Autumn could bloom she would do so, in this poem... simply because of the way you led her on... and led her, to be. [P.S. It is marvelous, when read aloud!] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a vivid and brilliant description!! I always enjoy your poems! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
HOW do you do that? sheesh... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love your poetry. This poem is another beauty. Thank you. a |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Stephen~ Oh my, at the sheer lyrical beauty of this piece when read out loud~ It dances off the tongue so merrily~ Would make such a lovely piece printed out and framed in a kaleidoscope of Autumn leaves ... with your permission, I'd like to do just that !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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CraigM Junior Member
since 2006-10-05
Posts 13 |
As i continue to read these poems they amaze me more and more. A fantastic description. An awesome write. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thank you all for the kind words, and Marge you are certainly welcome to a copy. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful! *S* Our "autumn" is about 5 minutes long... but you let me experience what it should be through your words. *S* |
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