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Open Poetry #39

Crystal Epochal

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-10-05 11:05 PM

Crystal Epochal

All pseudo but reflections
In the sheen of early daylight standing
The tree whose arms reach farther
Than my arms sure ever could
Blowing is the wind, gentle fingers through the grass
Churning memories forgotten for my daydreams
How wonderful she was
The birds that fly south cry a song I love
Slow arrow fly to the warmth of her bosom
Carry a letter in the shape of my heart
To a lady who lives there
Where the beaming sun is shining down pacifically
Each sunrise there is heaven, each sunset-night
The gift I wish to give
This day a day I hope remembrance
My light within a-'lumine

I am the two-toed wanderer

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

1 posted 2006-10-05 11:52 PM

All i can say is 'Wow'!...just incredible,
I really enjoyed reading this!...
Good Work!.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-10-06 07:32 AM

"Carry a letter in the shape of my heart
To a lady who lives there
Where the beaming sun is shining down pacifically"

what a request!! I love it!

very vivid feelings here, and I love the ending very much

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-06 12:15 PM

Pure Matt. You have a visual vocabulary, and an ortory imagination. Your feelings are tangible to the reader.

Very lovely.

Sandra

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