Open Poetry #39 |
Today I Woke Up |
DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thanks to all the members who have been reading and posting in my poems. Their Congratulations and critics have been useful. Today I Woke Up today i woke up with the memories of our last date what i find curious about it is that it was a long time ago today i woke up with a warm feeling in my lips the funny thing is the last kiss you gave me was a long time ago today i woke up desiring to see you the strange thing about it is that i remember i said that i didn't want to see you again but now i want to see you i want to betray my words i want to forgive and forget everything because thanks to this desire i could stop dreaming i could stop sleeping because of this desire of seeing you again today i woke up. |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
I like this. But be careful of realizations like that. Loneliness is a powerful motivator, but it often points us in the wrong direction. "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
this was to my liking I am the two-toed wanderer |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I love this!! I love how you ended it! |
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