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Open Poetry #39

Wish You Could Be Here

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

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Closer to Hell...

0 posted 2006-10-05 06:24 PM

Wish you could be here
I’m really missing you
Walking by the seashore
It’s almost to good to be true

Wish you could be here
And see what I’ve found
Trinkets and scattered nick-knacks
Cover the sandy ground

Wish you could be here
I know you do too
Looking down from heaven
I feel your light shining through

ChePacifica
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 58
Ignore Alien Orders

1 posted 2006-10-05 07:06 PM

thats lovely - very good job Kira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-10-06 07:37 AM

sweet sentiments

I like to think those in heaven are still with us

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-10-06 09:13 AM

Kira, a tender, spirited write that was beautifully ~ and vividly ~ expressed.

Love & Eternal Light,

Linda

Martie

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California

4 posted 2006-10-06 12:50 PM

Kira...I have felt that way....you wrote it well!

Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05

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In a state of disrepair...

5 posted 2006-10-06 02:29 PM

Ahh, thanks for this. I just had to listen to Wish You Were Here after I read through.

So you think you can tell heaven from hell? Blue skies from pain?

Yet another good onw.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

6 posted 2006-10-07 09:15 AM

Wow! Happy so many enjoyed.

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