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Terra Cotta Scramble
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Terra Cotta Scramble |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Terra Cotta Scramble Run down the bricks of attention time takes just a minute The wind has taken over the clouds whisked trails of milk there Cool walk of good dog sniffer long sleeves have come Squirrel the noise of trees lip sink rustle Cotton underclothes and jeans litter the sidewalk sway Bring the kitty close and warm the hand with purr I am loaded with purple and the dredge of time The terra cotta is scrambled a patina making cement sudden art The breeze comes gently now the thought of your hands comes too And the blue blue sky [This message has been edited by Martie (10-05-2006 04:32 PM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am loaded with purple and the dredge of time" it's all so pretty Martie autumn came here for a minute then left for California I guess... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ 'I am loaded with purple and the dredge of time The terra cotta is scrambled a patina making cement sudden art' I don't know about your 'purple' but you sure are loaded with some mighty PURTY thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The wind has taken over the clouds whisked trails of milk there I was watching those very clouds, and they gave me that exact thought....you show them brilliantly here.....and oh, what the evening sun and near-full moonbeams did to them just at sundown! The pace of this, yes, it's like a walk, with a beautiful and insightful lady to help me see it as she does. Speaking of which, I do like that new picture! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful images here Marti one. I love the poetry of you. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you have such a way with words Martie, and it is always....always... so beautiful when you speak. Love this, Martie. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's that time this time.. glorious, riotous moment! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I sometimes wonder if your eyes actually do see colors that ordinary eyes do not, and if you could somehow show them to us in the way you show us feelings we had in even the most ordinary of circumstances, but didn't recognize until you put them into words. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Martie, This is beautiful so beautiful |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The cream which you gently pour into your cup of tea swirls so beautifully.... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The terra cotta is scrambled a patina making cement sudden art I love your creativity in writing and imagery. Your artistry is quite evident! You have masterfully painted an Autumn scene! Think I'm going to run away with this to my library. I could easily fall within the painting of this--kind of like the scene in Mary Poppins where Dick Van Dyke is painting on the sidewalk... Wow! misc |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks so much for the replies...it was just an ordinary walk, but is there such a thing? Misce, I have a photo of it...if you send me your email address I'll send it to you.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
what a joy it is to read how you see things - loved it Martie - Paul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome write, Martie....each line a treat. *hugs*....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, the patina on clay is my favorite thing to "look into" as it is art, and you say this well. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I missed this one until now but what a lovely walk you take us on, Martie. To see as you see is a beautiful gift to us all - thank you! |
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