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Open Poetry #39

The Smile in Your Eyes

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-10-05 12:37 PM

I will meet you in dreams for now
Where we shall share our souls
In the deepest dark of night
Until the morning bell tolls

I will be there as a spirit within
Feel me as you awake to the light
Warmed by but words from me
And of the day that vanquishes the night

I will take you on a journey
Whispered only from lips of mine
Hear my voice as it echoes for you
Across the vastness of space and time

I will be the smile in your eyes
With you wherever paths may lead
I will burn inside your passion
And together the flames we’ll feed

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2006-10-05 12:39 PM

This one surely speaks to me, for I will always carry the smile in a friend's eyes, her smile, and her wisdom with me until we one day hopefully meet again. I have kept this - beautiful poem.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-10-05 12:52 PM

I will burn inside your passion
And together the flames we’ll feed

~*~

Gifts like this
usually mean more than the giver
would ever know.

Your friend will indeed know
the truth behind these lovely sentiments, Poet.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-05 01:28 PM

Very good writing!!
thank you for sharing! i really liked it!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-10-05 01:39 PM

"I will be the smile in your eyes
With you wherever paths may lead"

beautiful indeed
Refugee

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2006-10-05 03:30 PM

Refugee friend, you do this so well, more please

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-10-05 04:36 PM

Refugee, this is a warm and beautiful write, surely your friend is blessed by your words. Hugs.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2006-10-05 05:28 PM

I agree with every comment here...and...
Yes, you do these very well.

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