When I Asked God (For you, Yess)

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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-04 11:47 PM

...Here we go.
I don't like posting more than one poem per day.
But this one has a special meaning for me. It's about the person I love and how difficult is for me to take the situation that we can't be toghether and how difficult is for me to understand that maybe, just maybe, i have to wait a little.
Once again thank you to all those who supported me on my last poem, thank you for the critics and the advice, thank you deeply.

When I Asked God (For you, Yess)

My Life
Since the Beginning
has been nice

i had my loved ones
which with time
unfortunately faded away
i had my friends
many of them dissapeared
when i most needed them
but some of them stayed
showing me what true friendship was

Everything was
perfect for me
until i asked god
if he couldn't bring me
a new love
to bring back
that long lost feeling
to my heart

he gave me
a single chance
one night
to prove if i could tell you
what i felt for you

i took the chance
and we were toghether that night
but then you left and we hardly talked

what happened?
didn't you tell me that you've been waiting
for someone like me
to appear in your life?

why did you change?
why did you left me
with just a warm kiss
in my lips?

i fell in love with you
i can't forget you
since then

weeks have passed
why don't you tell me what happened?
what made you leave?

Running from the truth
i went and talked to god
a night just like
when i met you
just like the one
when you gave me your heart
i shouted

God! Answer my call!
tell me if she is there waiting
or if she has found someone else
tell me
if my yess still loves me.

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I know this is long, but it's something i needed to share, as i'm suffering a lot for her...i just needed to share it.
thank you for reading

Denis.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-10-05 12:02 PM

this is so much easier to read now

now, as far as your yess...well, if it's meant to be, she will come back. If not, then God has reasons for everything. Usually we see them down the road a ways.

I know it's hard...feeling this way...but really, trust me, things all turn out for the best.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-10-05 12:24 PM

"God! Answer my call!"

such a painful cry
DreamerSpirit

I hope it works out...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2006-10-05 08:14 AM

I do hope your question is answered soon. Just for you peace of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-10-05 09:01 AM

Such an ache to this write.
I do hope it all works out for you.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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