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Open Poetry #39

Love and Imagination

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-09-04 07:44 PM

Love and Imagination

In a broken relationship
it is always possible
that they were not as
close as we imagined,
and when they move on,
we spend time wondering why.
Something that they already knew,
because within their heart,
they were never there.

JamesLee
01September
2006
Heartsmakechoices

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2006-09-04 08:36 PM

I really like this! there really isn't a rhyme scheme but for this poem it's okay

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-09-04 09:30 PM

The soul knows, even when the heart does not.

Aloha hugs to you, Hawaiin Man
Linda

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-04 09:51 PM

nicely done James...

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

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Michigan

4 posted 2006-09-04 10:45 PM

Very well put, and nicely done. I like this very much.

Sandra

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2006-09-05 10:57 PM

nice one james

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2006-09-07 05:36 PM

Thank you pen and paper, Earth Angel, The Lady, seraphin and MGROVES for the nice responses....James

FNG
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since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

7 posted 2006-09-08 11:07 PM

So true...2 friends of mine broke off recently and we thought they should be there, but not as we seem eventually...

william foos
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since 2006-09-13

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schenectady,new york,usa

8 posted 2006-09-23 10:29 AM

there as so many that say they love you but this is indeed only from their mouth and not from the heart great write keep doing well love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2006-09-23 05:06 PM

Most wise JM...

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