Open Poetry #39 |
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Eye Sky Candy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Upon awakening this morning did hues of purple and pink dance your mind, and did you take it as a sign of what the day could hold in store, or did you wish that you could see more? Colors of rainbows turned to black; did you peel the shades and turn them back, to the images you hold inside where pale of thoughts do reside, and did you hear a whisper of sigh when candy visions drifted from the sky? seek the flame within yourself |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes...... |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Imagery like this...wow. Great stuff. I enjoyed every line. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
A remarkable write upon which I remark, Remarkable! Very nice, indeed! Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I missed this one Donna and it's a beauty... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Oh my goodness! This is where I've begun tonight's reading and where I'll stop! Devine imagery! (a must have in the ole library!) miscellanea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are all so gracious with your replies, I thank you. Have a fantastic weekend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! What a write! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
The imagery in this poem is Great! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am in love with this poem. Thank you for introducing us. aziza |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Hmmm, very lovely and it provokes your imagination....Great job aunt of mine. "My soul is adrift in oceans of madness |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (does happy pink fairy floss flamenco) Mmmmmmmmm, this sky sounds like it's going to be a tutti-frutti zip-a-dee-doo-dah zydeco, yay! (smiles) You always paint such upbeat, sonorous pictures with your words, yay, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I really like this one, Donna. Hope your skys stay candy......jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes - I always sigh when beautiful things pass from sight but I'm glad you saw! |
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