Open Poetry #39 |
Lady Of The Lake |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Lady Of The Lake On star filled nights as ripples break She rises from beneath the lake In shimmering gowns of pale moonlight With silvery hair and skin of white Dancing upon the water’s crest With stardust pearls across her breast As every wave begins to curl She greets them with a gentle twirl A timeless beauty without age She flows across her watery stage So gracefully she’ll pirouette As moonlight frames her silhouette She calls to me ‘cross waters deep As I toss about in restless sleep To join her there in fluid dance Held captive in her mystic trance Singing softly as she sways I'm captured by her haunting gaze She wraps me in her misty arms I'm lost within her watery charms I feel her cool soft fingertips As she kisses me upon the lips Then I awake in nervous sweat My face and brow are soaking wet But is it sweat that coats my face? Or the essence of her sweet embrace? Her beauty haunts each waking hour Draining me of all willpower I am afraid that very soon I'll hear her gentle haunting tune And not be able to awake To resist the Lady of the Lake |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Wonderful! My gosh, that word seems so over-used, yet it is exactly what this work is. The imagery, the flow, the meter. Moving and magical. This is absolutely, undeniably, characteristically, intristically, perfectly wonderful! A keeper, my poetic friend. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seraphin, a thank you can never be overused. But a WOW probably is. Albeit? WOW.... Enjoying this, very much! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I was mesmerized by the beauty of your poem. It's exquisite -- just lovely. Thank you for a breath-taking read. Alison |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
This has such a mystical, magical fairy-tale like quality to its romance. I like it a lot. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Stephen~ Absolutely mesmerizing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for all the kind comments, I'm glad this was well recieved. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Comes back. I hope all take the time to read this poem. It is sheer beauty in words. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this "all" has read it and agrees with aziza Steve your work is beautiful (another overused word) |
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