Open Poetry #39 |
Golden Extremes |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Let no heart be swayed by essence of whimsy Let no mind be filled with a raging heat Let reason be free both written and spoken Let kindness rule whenever two meet. And if I should find a world all this perfect If a haven exists where these are not dreams Then Lord guide my feet cross the uncounted miles To the gate of this Eden of golden extremes. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And if I should find a world all this perfect If a haven exists where these are not dreams ~*~ Amen! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And if I should find a world all this perfect" oh my yes Sandra but your poem is perfect... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Sunshine and Lady, thank you both. Sandra |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love this equisite mantra...may I borrow it? ....jo |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Jo~ I would be delighted to have you borrow it! Thank you for the read. Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is my kind of "beginning to my day"! Better than breakfast! Wow! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Aww, thank you Dixie! Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perfect Sandra, I much needed this read today. Hugs to you. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Your name exudes the image I was trying to capture. You are just what this world is calling for, you know. Gentle Spirit. It does say it all. Wishing you a day of peace. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A feast to be counted on. Such talent here. TD |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Kathleen, My most sincere thanks. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ Such a pretty, poignant, poetic prayer~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
And make Heaven a place of your own being... Loved this. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
((Marge)) You always see my meaning, and you always care. Thank you, for now, and for then. Sandra |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Refugee, Your response is lovely. Something to expand upon. A starting point, maybe. I would love to see you do something with it, as it is just a perfect line. I will be looking. Sandra |
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