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Open Poetry #39

Lay Your Burden Down

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-10-03 01:50 PM

Rest your weary head down upon my lap
Forget for a time all the cares away
Let me be your guide, your comforting map,
To the place where your soul will always stay

The moon and stars have nothing on you
There is something about the wavelength shared
Which makes a light shine upon all you do
And sets yourself apart from all compare

Time and distance shall do their best to stay
The thoughts that travel from mind to mind
Forget for awhile travails of today
And let us now leave all of this behind

I shall hold you up, never to touch ground
To help you smile and lay your burden down

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-10-03 01:52 PM

From first line til last,
a comforting read.

This is lovely.

Sandra

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-03 02:09 PM

This was truly something special.

~Kira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-10-03 02:10 PM

Ok with us
that you are a romantic.

Looking forward to more.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-10-03 04:32 PM

The comfort of a friend can be most healing.
What a beautiful message you gift.

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