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Open Poetry #39

Chaos Reigns

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-10-02 07:53 AM

Rewrite:

Chaos Reigns

Each drop of dew that touches you
Is part the mist of morning’s coup?
Circling me a magic shroud
This mist that forms a sailing cloud

This life a world of chaos reign
On land and sea and life in vain
Subject to chaotic law
Reigning with an acid pour

We scramble for our daily needs
With quick replacement of our seeds
But since chaotic is the law
It’s bow to that or nothing more

And those that go beyond the veil
Are swallowed by a Jonah Whale
No mater how the voyage be
We stay the belly of the sea

We are that kingdoms chaos king
Change and changing everything

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2006-10-02 07:56 AM

Seymour, this is beatiful, as always. Yes, this world is full of chaos.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-10-02 07:57 AM

Your wisdom is what reigns here, Sy.

And we thank you for your continued gifts
of foresight, and caring.

Thomas1
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since 2006-10-02

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Felixstowe United Kingdom

3 posted 2006-10-02 07:57 AM

Loved this, enjoyed it thoroughly!
The last lines sum up the poem very well, and to me are touching

"We are that kingdoms chaos king
Change and changing everything"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-10-02 08:00 AM

SmartChick
It's you that are the beauty, I am in the Whale.