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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

0 posted 2006-10-01 10:04 PM

You say that you love me
That you’d put no one else above me
Grant all my fondest wishes
And steal away all my kisses

You say that you’ll hold me through every trial
That you won’t let me live my life in denial
Words dripping sweetly from your mouth
But your sincerity I can’t help but doubt

So show me what you mean
Let it be on you that my head may lean
Show me what you want to say
If you really love me you wont walk away

So show me that you can be trusted
I hate for my heart to again be busted
Show me that there’s more to love
Than just words and all of the above

You say that time will tell all
And promise you’ll answer when I call
You say either night or day
If I need you you’ll be on your way

You say that loving me changed your heart
that you weren’t like this from the start
You say that together we can reach the sky
and every day I pray it isn’t all a lie

So show this doubting heart how to care
I know that in the end I’m not being fair
Show me that it’s okay to have faith in someone
Let me know that I wont be a hit and run

So show me how to love again
I’ve been bruised and scarred by other men
Show me that I’m not as ugly as I feel
Let me know what we have is real

You say that this is really love
And that hand in hand we’ll reach the sky above

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-10-01 10:14 PM

Life is a great teacher;
as are memories.

You're off to a great start,
simply because you are questioning
so much.

Enjoyed this, Kira.

Write on!

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-01 10:20 PM

Thankyou Sunshine!

So happy to have your reading my work! ( I'm really flattered) Thankyou lots and lots!!!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-10-01 11:55 PM

You are quite welcome. I hope that you
will come to grips with all you are feeling,
and come to write it in terms of understanding, as you can, down the line.

In the meantime, write, knowing that the world
will be available to read all that you leave
in the blue pages.

Be well, Poet.

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