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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Cat Dash Girl Walking down the road Body flagging side to side Whew, she's got a load! Her torso is extended; Head is held so high, Legs are almost sprinting, Mouth is running dry; (Tongue upon her lips.) He couldn't help but notice her In sleek black boots, The come-on that he gives her- Like water that feeds the roots, "Hey ya, Kitty, howdy do? Would ya like to get some foooood? How 'bout a little chowww? Dig right in there, Honey!" Food for thought right now... "Whoa, Babe-put your Pause on me! Hurry won't ya? Catch that itching, blasted flea!" (How very gullable, Dirty dogs can be...) [This message has been edited by miscellanea (09-30-2006 05:40 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Put your pause upon me, Can you, can you scratch that itching flea? How, how guillible, you dirty dogs can be." Put your "pause"....too funny. I can tell you are in one of your funnier, creative moods tonight, Miss C. Better watch out for those Wolf Hounds....hehehe. *hugs*...jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Hey, when opportunity knocks, ya take it. Thought up a line or two, and just had to make something from it. Words and sounds are just too dog-gone-fun to waste. have a good weekend! misC [This message has been edited by miscellanea (09-30-2006 09:33 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep! That we can! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Hey there, Ratleader! It's good to see you! You're not the only one who has the market on gullabiltiy! I can't believe all the lines I've fallen for! Now, me wiser little bird. Have a marvelous weekend! miscellanea |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Loved the play on words. Well done. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
sewasham, Glad you liked the word play. I don't do it well verbally, but I sure like to do word play in writing. I try to put a lot of hidden plays or analogies in almost all of my poetry--kind of like playing Where's Waldo. It thrills me when someone notices it. Thanks for noticing and commenting. miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
James, I'm very glad you enjoyed. I enjoy reading your poetry, as well. Thank you for responding to Cats'anova miscellanea |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a fun poem to read -- makes me think how fun it must have been to write. I love the play on words. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Mouth is running dry; (Tongue upon her lips.)" oh my gosh! I love this misc' can't leave it alone! gotta have it! |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Now the title pulled me in, and it's left me with more than a grin. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... loved your wordplay... thanks for the grins! *S* |
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mrmojorisin5908 Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 103Colorado |
This sounds very "beat" to me. Much enjoyed Andrew A. |
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