Open Poetry #39 |
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Serenade Of The Rain |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA ![]() |
Serenade Of The Rain I love the gentle rains of spring That fall so softly as they sing A melody of sweet romance That calls to me “Come out and dance” So I will join the raindrops there As they pirouette upon the air Back and forth with them I’ll sway As they dance an aerial ballet The rain will keep a rhythmic beat Upon the pavement soft and sweet We’ll dance a step at nature’s ball While the crystal waters softly fall Then as the skies begin to clear And the final dance is drawing near I see the rainbow that’s been made By the falling raindrops serenade But I will hear again their call When gentle rains begin to fall ‘Til then within my heart remains The joy of dancing with the rains |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me wish it was raining right now excellent writing! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Stephen~ Your gentle rhyming cadence makes this a great read-aloud piece~ Enjoyed very much~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as others have said..so lovely to read aloud... M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very pretty! Yep, dancing in the rain sounds mighty appealing! Nice! miscellanea |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the flow of this is fantastic...and the topic couldn't be better! Unless of course you are dancing in the rain on a beach.... ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Stephen, this is so awesome. I love it all, the theme, the rhyme, just everything about it is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Ethel ![]() |
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