Open Poetry #39 |
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Ren Dez Vous |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Ren Dez Vous 1970 love long ago in some twilight lit with hope there encompassed three rooms with special view triangularly quartered and each name, with quaint whim where occupants were to abide by terraced landing, perhaps meet, then surely blush, for they would had to have met decidedly so, with the pink aficionado of the hotel’s keep for everything blushed warm, then, and there. Madonna Inn, do you still court sporting tests of wonder and light? Do you still jut ragged edges of showering marvels or have you undergone some synthetic “be careful” for everyone who cannot use common sense… and do you still exist for those lost in newly wed? Do your ceilings still sparkle in wink as some bride grins a blink or have you faded by slack of who cares of formality? Special moments of extraordinary delivery, you were pinkly blue and uncommonly known as a place to remember with a ren dez vous corner Even if we stood, as two trying to be one, in front of three imaginings. ~*~ A CA Memory http://www.madonnainn.com/ If you look closely, they are still there. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning, remembering the giant clamshell in the bathroom yes, you time warped me with this |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Took me back, too, SIL. I think *our place* got downed in one of the hurricanes...*hugs*.....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Even if we stood, as two trying to be one, in front of three imaginings." rose petals on the bed beautiful memories Karilea... love "pinkly blue" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...one of my favorite places enjoyed this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari...you have out done yourself with this....smiling at you here.... oh.....yes.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...you've taken me back to a time of travel and youth and wonder...thank you! ![]() |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
I can't say this took me back... But I really loved it anyways! It was nice to wake up to. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This took me back in time. A fantastic write, my friend. As always. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Brings back memories for me as well, though not there...another place...long ago... when passion was warm 24/7 and lust was more than a four letter word. |
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