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Open Poetry #39

new love

ChePacifica
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 58
Ignore Alien Orders

0 posted 2006-09-28 11:29 PM

throw your serpents
to the sea
let them swim
back to me

throw your hopes
to the sky
drink the kool-aid
You and I

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-09-28 11:47 PM

a fun new love
lift your cups
fill them up
gather the serpents
and play

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-09-30 01:00 AM

I love the simplicity of this poem. It's just clean and captivating -- I really like it.

aziza

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-30 01:14 AM

delightful!

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

4 posted 2006-09-30 01:20 AM

clean and captivating - my thoughts exactly. I love how this poem was short and didn't need to be, because I would have kept reading even if it were a hundred lines long. But the length suited it perfectly. I'll be looking for more of yours!!
cheye

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2006-09-30 01:39 AM

Caps off to this! Very clever.

miscellanea

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2006-09-30 10:05 PM

I like this alot.

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* Juju *
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-09-30 10:07 PM

Wonderful! I love it!
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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