»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #39
»
Falling Stars
| Open Poetry #39 |
|
Falling Stars |
|
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
|
Falling Stars Tonight I have arrived to a point in the middle the epicenter of a time where the stars are brittle I wonder if you learn from me not to settle into tandem but to keep on the look out stars may fall at random and if you're looking up you might catch them in your eyes if you’re lucky, twice or more, falling stars don't mean demise… but only if caught properly when you're standing at a place, you must be holding faith then when you turn upright your face there must be lack of noise stop, be still, and listen falling stars are only as loud as the dust that makes them glisten you must open a target soul they do not like empty jars you'll only catch them if you believe every night, God taps the stars. |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
This is a very beautiful write. You did a wonderful job on this. Thanks for sharing. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dixie girl, you touched me with this one....opened my heart to catch one, you did!  .....jo |
||
|
sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Simply beautiful... Its been a while!!!! |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
****sprinkled with stardust**** thanks for sharing, Dixiegal |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
stop, be still, and listen falling stars are only as loud as the dust that makes them glisten ~*~ Sweetie, I love this metamorphosis you've undergone... it's beautiful. |
||
|
Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
"the epicenter of a time where the stars are brittle" I love these lines, well in fact I like the whole thing... Simply great. Once again you've managed to cheer me up! You'll have to stop that, your making it difficult for me to be a peesimist. lol "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
||
|
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful expressed images , I am often there in the still of the night , looking up to those stars shing bright Hope |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dixie~ You know I loved this one from a long time ago~ Thank you for posting it again in the here and now~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
||
|
Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
This was absolutely beautilful! You spun your words into something special. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dixie So sensitive...to look is to see. |
||
|
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Terrific write, Dixie! Loved it all! |
||
|
Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
How serendipitous! Such a wonderful way to see a falling star... This poem makes me want to catch one! Peace, Moonkist |
||
|
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Dixie, this is so good. I really enjoyed this one. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each every single one of your replies touches my heart |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What lovely thoughts fell upon me, as I read your beautiful mind. TD |
||
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they are there always when you see beyond the impossible  morning dixie chick |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
TD, I'm happy you enjoyed this and had some lovely thoughts  morning Michele. I sure have missed ya! Good to see you! |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good morning Dixie, what a beautiful treasure I awaken to this morning! |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww, good morning Donna hope you have a beautiful and peaceful Sunday |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but to keep on the look out stars may fall at random" timely reminder for me Dixie beautiful work... |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Darlin' Dixie, this is pure pixie dust! May your soul be forever open to the beauty and magic of God's twinkling star Light. You are like a lovely lotus blossom. As your petals unfold, they reveal the beauty within you.  Love & Star Light, Linda |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kate and Linda thank you both |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you must be holding faith then when you turn upright your face How true... for falling stars and more. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
||
|
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Aww! -Juju |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful write Dixie... M |
||
|
DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Excellent!...One of the Best I have read. And once again, it's one of yours.. Excellent work congratulations!!.. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each for such warm comments here I cherish them all |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
