Open Poetry #39 |
Period |
Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
Breaking up writting And giving titles The end of a work Never revealing the endless rebirth Of a period ending one piece at a time Despite every connection From time to time Why put a period On an endless mind? Why put a period At the end of a work? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm, you've got me thinkin' (note the lack of a period!) lol EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now that is why I leave ellipses... Thoughtful thinking! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Being a fan of rarely ever using periods, I loved this. The flow is just wonderful. I'll be watching for more of your work. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
If I don't use a period, I'd probably keep rambling on endlessly. Rae |
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