Open Poetry #39 |
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- Forcing Heaven - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
(A Re-write of an Oldie....) Forcing Heaven Some days the loneliness is so palpable that it becomes the want turning itself outside, inside seething the survival that hides how dead I’ve become. They say that if you stare at something long enough the eyes mold it into desire. Perhaps if I rip my heart out and stare at it long enough I’ll finally feel. So, run the blade through the belly of a mocking sky – bleed heaven down it’s blissful secrets on loveless limbs and stone rock skin. I’m tired of waiting. Melissa Long-Monette Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Melissa.....so poignant this is...so sad..feeling this one with you. Heart hugs dear gal, good to read your words again. ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melissa, Ah sweet lady. No one feels more intensely than do you. I pray all is well. Peace. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Expressive, soulful writing. I felt every word. Hope that all is well for you, Honeybee. Warm hug, EA |
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