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Lisey
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since 2006-08-27
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0 posted 2006-09-27 02:33 PM



I lost it today
lost my way
felt shaky and sad
and strangly mad

I found myself today
found my feet
smelt the air
it smelt so sweet

it gets quite bizarre
a week in my life
one day ya lost
the next ya found


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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2006-09-27 02:36 PM


Lisey, I know that feeling of being lost one day and found the next....
you express this feeling through words nicely.  

Lisey
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2 posted 2006-09-27 02:40 PM


Feeling VERY lost today
D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2006-09-27 04:36 PM


"I found myself today
found my feet
smelt the air
it smelt so sweet"

Reading you verse enlightening it.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-09-27 04:40 PM


Lisey..
You're not lost...you're here with us.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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5 posted 2006-09-27 10:37 PM


You may be ahead of me....I found my way, but it didn't matter.

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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6 posted 2006-09-28 01:58 AM


Funny how that works .. the lost/found thing.  I am glad you got 'lost' here -- and I am glad that I 'found' your poetry.

aziza

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-09-28 11:18 AM


every day is a road, a long and winding road with many forks...we're bound to get lost!
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