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And The Band Plays On
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And The Band Plays On |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Excuse this futile attempt at something poetic... Stars loom silently in the Cool air of night, bracing For the crash of dawn….a Dawn of silence and fallen Crests…a dawn of deepening Thoughts and timeless jests… A dawn conspired from molten Hearts and long departs. From Falling clouds of comet’s dust And meteoric falls till now or bust. From heartfelt sighs and blue green Eyes…and smiles that one might Recognize….From stews that steam And smell so swell and dreams that One may never tell. Pass the sugar Please, dawn is Waiting for the old porch swing To creak and everyone went to Bed early…. and the band plays on. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote:  tell us more about those aromatic dreams |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
no excuse for this Barry I love it especially this part... "Pass the sugar Please, dawn is Waiting for the old porch swing To creak and everyone went to Bed early…. and the band plays on." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kate picked my favorite part  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dear Barry, everything you write is poetic!! I love everything I've ever read of yours. Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
FUTILE ATTEMPT????? Barry, you never ever write anything that is a futile attempt...all you write are sounds of poetic music, and this, is no exception. enjoyed |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i think it was a great attempt Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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