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miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

0 posted 2006-09-21 09:12 PM

Shirt is shed on summer's grass,
Leaves await their falling;
Grass is cutting free its seed,
Billowing clouds are calling.

They skim the skies while glancing down,
No 'possom do they play;
Hide and streak across the sky
'Til dusk sneaks on its way.

Upon the cloth he lies so still
while beams infuse man's chest;
His aura cradled in the clouds
As bustle absorbed by rest.

The grass, soon, will make a bed
for the yellow, red-orange, and brown;
Clouds will hide and streak the sky
But the shirtless man will not be found.

Under desk, shadowed knees,
Imagination dressed in dark;
Stress relief, "Coffee please..."
Overdue: postmark.

Behind a window, an airless wait,
Until the sun surprises day;
Then again, will he drop his cloth?
On the ground, will his shirt he lay?

misce'

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (09-21-2006 10:13 PM).]

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-09-21 11:09 PM

what an amazing piece misc'
I can't leave it alone
stunning...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2006-09-21 11:24 PM

I needed this poem....needed it. I've lost the good of what September can be, and now....yes, this.

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-09-21 11:55 PM

I hope it is not to late for me too see the leaves turn....have I already missed it? This is a wonderful piece of writing, Miss C and makes me miss the September days of Summer!

....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (09-22-2006 03:30 AM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2006-09-22 01:05 PM

Excellent work!!! *S* I've read it several times... finding new fascinations each time. *S*

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2006-09-22 01:09 PM

Amazing is indeed the word for this. Readable, re-readable, irresistable. Excellent work.

Sandra

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-09-22 01:31 PM

I was smiling and visualizing all the way through! Thanks for the very pleasant respite in my very hustly bustly day!

I enjoyed the interlude, Sweet misc!

Loving hug and a warm smile,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2006-09-22 05:42 PM

Enjoyed...James

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