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Open Poetry #39

window of shi garden

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-21 07:29 AM

daughter of dawn
wear your wet uniform
and trail the garden stones

with your footprint mystery
wear the pale blue
that exonerates your bosom

present your horizon then
in coy revelation
to seduce the old man trees

as you tongue flick their limbs
leaving your scent sensual
on the closing of their scars

your liquor is their saliva
so hurry now and hide your bronze
lest it become their addiction

to your velvet morning conjuring

___________

daark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-09-21 07:50 AM

I was hooked from the very first line.

D....this is beyond beautiful.

There is nothing quite like the morning view through your eyes.

My day, has officially been dubbed as having been started perfectly with this write.

You do lovely, as no one else can.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-09-21 11:40 AM

daughter of dawn
wear your wet uniform
and trail the garden stones

~*~

You must have seen the weather map...
with rain rivulets all over this state...

you've blessed the stones again
as well.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-09-21 01:55 PM

Ahhhh Dar! Never will morning be looked at quite the same.

Sandra

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-09-21 05:16 PM

“velvet morning conjuring”

Stranger..
I love beginning the morning
with you

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2006-09-21 05:44 PM

ms gs, thanks donna, you make me smile with your morning wave

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ms sunshine, enjoy the damn blessing, thank you for yours on my humble words

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ms sandra, you sooth me lady friend, thanks to you

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ladyone, your reply makes me want morning to hurry around again soon, thank you

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