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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Can't If I wanted her to leave perhaps the missing wouldn't be so bad. If she gave me a reasonable explanation, maybe I wouldn't be so sad. I wanted to write of something more than my missing her. Sometimes I can. Most of the time... I can not. JamesLee 19September 2006 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Understanding this James...  ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
When one's heart is so heavy all that can come out is it's ache. That's what good poetry is all about...letting it all hang out. Plus I think it's grand therapy. Rae |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Nice Write |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Poignantly understood. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well done James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I think most of us can understand and relate to this. It doesn't make it any easier, I know, but perhaps it's all part and parcel of being human. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nice write James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your missing of her, be replaced by sweet remembrances that can warm your heart on days when winds blow cold. warm,aloha hugs, Linda |
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