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I Kissed Her
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I Kissed Her |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Kissed Her I kissed her over morning’s tea And on the oceans sandy shore I carved her name upon a tree And said I’d love her evermore I promised her the moon the stars And take her to the world of Oz A lovely home a pretty car The prettiest garden ever was And now I think and heave a sigh Did I reach my promised goal? I never meant to tell a lie The bouquet was my very soul I pray that she be satisfy I know sometimes I’ve been a bore I’ve done my best to vivify To do all youth has ever swore Forgive me if I’ve fallen short We still have yet the final port |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you've always done everything possible to bring joy to any one's life...always... fear not, dear Sy. You're one in a million... and that's why she kept you!    |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A kiss? To be so lucky!  Sy, your lady knows. Rainbows seem to move their pot of gold, but how many times you must have been her blue sky, her sun, and her rain for the garden she grows... We tend to take for granted the seeds we plant, don't we? But the blooms, oh the blooms!  ~ K |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I dont think you could fall short if you tried Sir Sey. Nicely written!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think dear Isabel go all she dreamed of and more dear Sy!  ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sir Sigh, your morning's kiss must be sheer bliss. Isabel must be quite a woman to have captured ~ and kept! ~ the heart of a sweet, sonneteering man such as yourself! A poem that touches the heart. May your love last beyond this world and into the next!  Loving Light EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, your soft heart is a delight to experience! ... and with every kiss the promised happiness "flares" again, what a gift when we are committed like you to love and to bring joy to our partners. Beautiful!! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your priceless glad you have your treasure and she has hers,hearts and souls,love,precise My spirit will rise |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you surely did kiss her Sir Sy... and oh so much more you done good nice poem too |
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