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Foreign Princess (please look at this one atleast)
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Foreign Princess (please look at this one atleast) |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
Curious if you would think this would make a girl think twice if she took in emotion felt in this poem Foreign Princess(14 Syllable Poem) Encounter with perfection (Chapter 1) Try to picture the Niagara Falls on a full moon night And in the sky dances the aura borealis You’re visualizing a wonder that is awe at first sight The equivalent is hidden in a foreign palace I caught my first glimpse of this untouched manifestation While I was traveling and looking for direction Deep inner attraction sparked out of short conversation She soon took me in my home was made Her soft warm touch perfectly shut down my nervous system Reality slowed, hours later we'd still be kissing The angel's persona shines just as her brown eyes glisten I drop her off and already it her smile I’m missing Beautiful time flew by till one grey day I woke up lost My goddess had suddenly lost interest and departed She disappeared out the door with the key to my heart tossed Now in a sea of delusion in waters uncharted In Reality I Drove her to the Edge and she Jumped (Chapter 2) Parting two beings that logically work to perfection It’s a sin that is picture perfect, but lacks exposure Starting from scratch grows out of the basis of rejection But it’s always harder when there is no sense of closure Psychologically we are built to handle crisis But when crisis gets tired of walking it collapses Is it wrong to need each other to enjoy life’s spices? Still day after day strong integrity slowly passes More unsaid words slip away as I near this chapter's end What’s meant to be is often clouded with blurry judgment We squint to see past the bullshit, but find another bend I miss you and not trying enough is what I resent All that's left is this last stanza bleeding into the page Words pounded out the hidden feelings that we both held close I was that actor with talent once close to center stage Now that I lost you, my one and only, I’m just all woes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much emotion here and yes, I believe it would make her think twice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...I've noticed that sometimes when we seem to do everything, we strike out, and then some bozo comes along that doesn't have to do hardly anything and he gets in, just because he was the chosen one...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very powerful Paul would sure make me think twice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Absolutely beautiful darling.....expressed perfectly! "We squint to see past the bullshit, but find another bend I miss you and not trying enough is what I resent" My favorite lines actually..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes, makes you think twice  My spirit will rise |
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