Open Poetry #39 |
Windy |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Windy Wild weather comes Destruction in its wake Homes destroyed all over the town Absolute devastation everywhere One by one, they surface again Loved ones faces in view Brings heartfelt sighs Windy~ ~Thoughts of Christmas Day and the tornadoes that took my brother's home, along with so many others ... we thank God for the lives spared~ ~Thank you all for the kind messages that you've sent and the prayers lifting them in comfort~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah Marge, dear lady. Bless all of those brave souls having to start all over again. Hugs to you and yours, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i liked this. really simple and nice, i liked how u ended it |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I'm so glad that your loved ones are safe. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*praying* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Warmest hugs to you and yours Marge. I, too, am glad that everyone is okay. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It shows again that nature is unpredictable. I'm so glad your brother is safe. Material can be replaced, brothers can not. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So much lost in such a brief time. My heart and prayers go out to all those who lost so much. Love you lady~ In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Lovely and a delight to read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been praying for God to give your family strength to stay where they are to begin again to keep together through the trials. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
moving poem Marge "Loved ones faces in view Brings heartfelt sighs" and for that we give thanks... |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very nice. the ruins..down and the loves...rise and the sorror--wind away. |
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