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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2007-01-04 10:17 PM

It takes

the slightest touch
silken slide
of ebb and flow glide
upon my skin
tender stepping
and feeling freedom
for my soul

It is

the softest whispering
of familiarity
the scent of comfort
in every breath
at the edge of giants
welcoming me
home

~SEA~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-01-04 10:22 PM

I think it is Welcome Home...
and about time!

Write!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2007-01-04 10:39 PM

SEA
A welcome delight to read.

exhale
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Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2007-01-04 11:42 PM

A wonderful wonderful read!
Well written

shirtless
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4 posted 2007-01-05 01:26 AM

I like. I will return to this poem for rereading. It is cool, and warm, and hot.
Thanks for posting it.

YOU CAN HEAR THE AUDIO VERSIONS OF MY POETRY AT http://www.myspace.com/shirtlesstattoo

time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

5 posted 2007-01-05 03:45 AM

Welcome back, from whichever direction and by whatever guidance.

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2007-01-05 05:51 AM

just gorgeous!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

7 posted 2007-01-05 07:22 AM

ms suesea, nice to see you back with the shades up

LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-01-05 07:35 AM

oh how lovely this is....it is so nice to read you again....loved every line...so placid and surreal, yet, comforting and enveloping...thank you for sharing.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

9 posted 2007-01-05 08:55 AM

Beautiful Sue!
Your writing is like a breath of fresh air.
Just lovely!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

scorpio
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right...there

10 posted 2007-01-05 09:04 AM

Beautiful!

believe in what your heart feels...

Pilgrimage
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11 posted 2007-01-05 10:20 AM

Oh! Excellent.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Christopher

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Purgatorial Incarceration

12 posted 2007-01-05 02:27 PM

I really like this Susanofer! It breathes and hints at more than I think you were directly aiming for... accompanied with the picture (by the way, can you hook me up with the girl in the pic??? zowie!

) I was minded of the giant that is the ocean and how, everytime I look at it, it makes me feel so small.

This is another great by the all-mighty Susanofer! May your house be warm and the snow melt soon.

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

13 posted 2007-01-05 02:56 PM

   Oh so very, very nice!!

      "The softest whispering
       of familiarity
       the scent of comfort
       in every breath."

   When one truly knows they 'Belong'.

           Moonshadow
.

Devious Intellectual
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14 posted 2007-01-05 03:00 PM

i like this really fresh and soft, cant wait to read more!

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2007-01-05 03:44 PM

The edge of giants...

I like that, and this poem very much. Sometimes a little contemplation is necessary to put things in perspective. We are, afterall, just a small piece of a larger schemata.

Well done, lovie.

morbid
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16 posted 2007-01-05 04:12 PM

oOoOo
Prettyness

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

17 posted 2007-01-05 04:27 PM

Since I am always brutally honest

Those giants become matchsticks,
dwindling with the missing of you,
even with their view of the wonderful
Pacific, SEA.

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands

18 posted 2007-01-05 05:16 PM

Truly beautiful, so nice to see you again and read your wonderful poetry.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2007-01-05 05:25 PM

Enjoyed...James

SEA

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with you

20 posted 2007-01-06 12:40 PM

Thank you all so much for your very nice replies!

and a special thank you to Interloper...he knows why

serenity blaze
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21 posted 2007-01-06 05:04 AM

and just a little bump from a grateful woman to a lovely lady--she bought my bed.

smile

That is A LOT.

She bought my bed.

I will nevah, evah forget you.

SEA

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with you

22 posted 2007-01-06 11:55 AM

K

you are loved woman....

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