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the quell
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0 posted 2007-01-04 07:08 PM


a sort-of Jeff Buckley tribute, because I am odd.

*~*~SALT~AND~SORCERY~*~*

At night, a Calling:
A seething, saltwater summons...
Scorching the pink inner-skin of a seashell ear.
The ocean throbs like a woman’s heart – vampiric veins aflame with Salt and Sorcery.
The Princess drifts, a thing of crippled bones and glistening smiles all freshly steeped in gore.
Frostblade claws a-shimmer...
Ghastly, she gushes, from Neptunian depths,
And your silent soul unfurls.

As a stone, submerged...submitting...
Tender, tainted minstrel grips a ruptured lyre with fingers of blood-washed willow~
Like the arteries that cage a broken heart.
And the downpour flails in terrible rippling shoals of copper,
With the anaemic flicker of unborn melody:
For he is the voice behind the rain.

Another night, another mountain, groaning...
This mountain dare not weep.

Etched in comet-dust he sits, sighing at my windowsill
Lukewarm fingers threading veils of flaxen sunshine, intangible as slumber

Oh, you truly knew what it was...
To sleep in a dead man’s shadow.

The moonlight filters through him,
Through the miles and miles of faded summer melody
Mellow gold, these vales, these swaying fallow worlds of dishwater–
To die singing...
Is surely to die on fire.
(Or to scream, with spider-silk lungs disintegrating)
His voice held galaxies~
And it left the ocean full of stars.

Who ever knew that a mountain...
Could be so very lonely?

I curse these four cruel walls, looming like ancient, dust-bearded faces, with..
Nothing left to teach me.
A song it taps upon the window pane
I see, through a mist of painted words and dandelion seeds,
The tarnished stars bedraggled with Salt and Sorcery, and the thrumming wings of a dark, dark angel
The Dead, they walk...
The Dead, they breathe...
(As deeply as the sea)
His ghost, it trickles through my dreams,
And with the clink of a broken wing, he smiles…

Alone.
Fettered, by chains I adore
Chains I could not be without
I lie, silent,
Asleep in a dead man’s shadow.


© Copyright 2007 Rachel Isaacs - All Rights Reserved
Triskaidekaphobia
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1 posted 2007-01-04 07:22 PM


"a sort-of Jeff Buckley tribute, because I am odd." Strange I didn't realise that meant you're odd... just means you have some taste

I enjoyed this.. . it reminds me of "The Sky Is A Landfill" which I love, so well done.

"Mellow gold, these vales, these swaying fallow worlds of dishwater–
To die singing...
Is surely to die on fire."

And those lines there are genius.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-01-04 08:58 PM


quell
A tinted flower of fading power. Enjoyed

Huan Yi
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Waukegan
3 posted 2007-01-04 09:37 PM


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A seething
Scorching
crippled bones
a ruptured lyre
broken heart
To sleep in a dead man’s shadow.
die singing...


The Dead, they walk...
The Dead, they breathe...


I adore
Chains

I lie
Asleep in a dead man’s shadow.


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