Open Poetry #39 |
Faith |
MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Faith" When velveteen clouds like heavenly shrouds cloak the sky at night; When darkness surrounds and confusion abounds longing for the light; When pain in your heart tears it apart till love seems all but gone; Faith shows its power for the darkest hour is just before the dawn. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
AMEN!!!! Glorious write! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Indeed! Well said Ken! Much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Without faith, life would be dismal indeed! Thanks for this. Bea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Faith and a belief in God and a belief in others can give you the strength to perservere...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto all the above. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Faith shows its power for the darkest hour is just before the dawn. ~HOWA OSDA~ Well done such beauty shared,trust is no an easy thing,faith is even harder!
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You appear to write from the "Light" side of the moon! Keep the faith! Love & Light, EA |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
very beautiful. And I found the ending quite touching. A wonderful expression of faith |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
perfect MoonShadow! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
faith is a quell to the darkest spell as morn becomes midnight, drawn. ~*~ See how you inspire, Moonshadow? Thank you. K |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I loved this! So true and so well done. Rae |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well written piece... I enjoyed it RDB |
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