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wredgranny
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0 posted 2007-01-03 11:30 PM



Only A Dream?

   Each rising sun brings forth wonder as I greet it with my prayers,each flaming sunset brings the hope that soon I will see you if only in my dreams.
   The stars that sing in ancient skies are haunting my spirit,soon again the dreams will start of the warrior who shares my soul and holds my heart.
   Where are you Tracker why do you call to me and never come,why do you control my heart and still ignore my calling?
   All I ask of you is truth and caring reaching out and sharing,warrior who walks my dreams I have so much love to give a lifetime of loyalty.
   Share with me the rainbows and the sunshine,the rainy days and snowtime,walk with me through this life side by side.
   There is nothing more I ask of you than a true heart and your loving,take my hand and lead me into these places I have never been.
   Teach me the things of life I have never known,that there are those who really care who hold hands and wisper secrets to each other.
   Tracker of the Stars leave my dreams and enter my life,I have missed and needed you for so long come to me my warrior and make my life complete!


  granny!

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JL
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1 posted 2007-01-04 12:36 PM


"Teach me the things of life I have never known,that there are those who really care who hold hands and wisper secrets to each other."

Love this line.
Nice write!!

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

wredgranny
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2 posted 2007-01-04 01:00 AM


Love this line.
Nice write!!

JL
Sigi from my heart,I am no so good at such writings but the dreams are there still!
blessings


  granny!

MoonShadow
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3 posted 2007-01-04 01:38 PM


   Milady... could not let this pass the day withough response... absolutely beautiful and moving.   Yet... "Only a Dream"??? 'Only' as if somehow insignificant... I think not dear, Lady... very significant (dreams) for those of us who live for dreams and dream to live.... dreams are a larger... sometimes more welcome.. part of my life. and such wonderful words you wrote that grabbed my heart and and flashed to me a vision of mine own so close to my soul as to scare me. "Flaming sunset brings the hope that soon I will see you, if only in my dreams." I cannot express how personally these words touched my soul and made my heart cry out, "YES!!"  It is amazing sometimes how a powerful phrase can be so poetic and moving.

    I bow to you and your mastery, Milady, and I remain... in service to the dream.

       MoonShadow


LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-01-04 03:04 PM


BRAVO!!!!

the entire poem held me close, but this, this was my favorite


Teach me the things of life I have never known,that there are those who really care who hold hands and wisper secrets to each other.


comforting to know...

hugs to ya

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-01-04 03:29 PM


If a dream, a nice one

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

wredgranny
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6 posted 2007-01-04 04:45 PM




Sigi MoonShadow,oginali I too know the dreams and wonder.I am deeply grateful for your kindness in understanding,for sometimes it is the dreams that sustain,eh?


  granny!

wredgranny
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7 posted 2007-01-04 04:48 PM




Sigi LeeJ my sister heart there are those of us who in truth have never known such gentle beauty or trust,have never known the shaking hands,and tenderness of a first kiss and there is mystery and yearning for such things always in the heart!


  granny!

wredgranny
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8 posted 2007-01-04 04:49 PM




Sigi Interloper my heart thanks you!


  granny!

time prophet
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9 posted 2007-01-05 03:54 AM


Dreams have a way of becoming the truth. My thoughts go with you.
wredgranny
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10 posted 2007-01-05 02:30 PM




Sigi Time Prophet such telling things are dreams,where whispers bare the heart and allow the spirit wings!
blessings


  granny!

The Lady
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11 posted 2007-01-05 08:51 PM




and these are the lines that called to my soul Granny...

  "Where are you Tracker why do you call to me and never come, why do you control my heart and still ignore my calling?"

so beseeching...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2007-01-06 12:40 PM


wow! I've been away only a few days and I come back to read your beautifully penned words from your heart... how wonderful!!

RDB

wredgranny
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13 posted 2007-01-06 06:29 PM


so beseeching...


Sigi my Lady sister,but in truth he drives me crazy calling in my dreams causing my heart to yearn for those things not meant for the Story Teller. That of love was never meant to be my life path you see?


  granny!

wredgranny
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14 posted 2007-01-06 06:30 PM



Sigi Roniece Dawson -Bruce my heart thanks you for your kind words!


  granny!

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