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reasons for the war of we
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reasons for the war of we |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There's a bit of you in me and a splotch of me in you and if it were an easy thing we'd be twins within the womb my gray eye would lighten you your dark gaze would level me-- and I could philosophically say this was a lesson learned but neither of us sleep - we churn-- fighting so umbilically. This is why we don't grow teeth until we learn the lesson "scorn" grappling for fatter teat even after we are born, inventing so creatively reasons for the war of "we" against the rationality of the need for more. * * * * * |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
is there a need of more or just a desire to receive more than a share? I like the twining (twinning) of thoughts in this and it bespeaks of sibling rivalry on so many levels. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gotta watch out for that umbilical  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
~HOWA~ So beautifully said,we are all kin,equals in all ways,though we may be so very different those things we learn to share make all better persons to know! blessings
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~ wonderful ~  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's a new address to your poetry, it's been briefed, by some new muse; written, if at all possible by someone who needs to pay for pages. Yet, it is all still, and quite gratefully, "serenity's work".    |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic work Ser! Love ya lady~ In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love to read you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
We are not identical twins, but twins in the self, looking for that other half of ourselves...our desires, wants.... anyway, that is what your beautiful words spoke to me... and echo Kari's words...this is a whole new you... an incredibly so.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This...was just a yin yang. Maybe more yang than yin, but I do tend to vascillate.  Thanks for reading. |
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