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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2007-01-03 11:59 AM

* * *

There's a bit of you in me
and a splotch of me in you
and if it were an easy thing
we'd be twins
within the womb
my gray eye would lighten you
your dark gaze would level me--
and I could philosophically
say this was a lesson learned
but neither of us sleep -
we churn--
fighting so umbilically.

This is why we don't grow teeth
until we learn the lesson
"scorn"
grappling for fatter teat
even after we are born,

inventing

so creatively

reasons for the war of "we"

against the rationality

of the need for more.

* * * * *

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2007-01-03 03:59 PM

is there a need of more or just a desire to receive more than a share? I like the twining (twinning) of thoughts in this and it bespeaks of sibling rivalry on so many levels.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2007-01-03 04:02 PM

Gotta watch out for that umbilical

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

3 posted 2007-01-03 05:21 PM

~HOWA~ So beautifully said,we are all kin,equals in all ways,though we may be so very different those things we learn to share make all better persons to know!
blessings

granny!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2007-01-03 07:25 PM

~ wonderful ~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-01-03 09:09 PM

There's a new address to your poetry,
it's been briefed, by some new
muse; written, if at all possible
by someone who needs to pay for pages.

Yet, it is all still, and quite
gratefully, "serenity's work".

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-01-03 09:20 PM

Fantastic work Ser!
Love ya lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2007-01-04 08:04 AM

always love to read you

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-01-04 08:28 AM

We are not identical twins, but twins in the self, looking for that other half of ourselves...our desires, wants....

anyway, that is what your beautiful words spoke to me...

and echo Kari's words...this is a whole new you...

an incredibly so....

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2007-01-05 03:11 PM

This...was just a yin yang.

Maybe more yang than yin, but I do tend to vascillate.

Thanks for reading.

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