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PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 69
South Australia, Australia

0 posted 2007-01-02 05:05 PM



SADDLEWORTH

A home in the country
a quiet country town,
green pastures in winter
summer they are brown.

Cows and sheep, babies in spring,
canola, grapes and various grain,
Farmers cry with a familiar ring,
it’s too dry, where’s the rain?

When will it end, this miserable time
back and forth to the bank, count the cost,
an all to often Farmers whine,
parched paddocks, cold and frost.

Generations of hardship and toil
burnt into a permanent frown,
The love of their patch of mottled soil
drives them to work from sun up to sun down.

Sell up and come into town,
the locals plead,
Leave the land scorched brown
and your soul won’t bleed.

City folk have an easy life
haven’t done a hard days toil
they don’t know heartache and strife
they will never understand the love of the soil.

But farmers and local folk make up the town
bright starry nights, the smell of gum trees
a mix of cars and shops and pastures turned brown,
there is no doubt it’s the country life for me.
    
                            Helen I L.

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2007-01-02 09:13 PM



sounds good to me Helen...


wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
Posts 493
Ky. USA
2 posted 2007-01-02 09:59 PM


City folk have an easy life
haven’t done a hard days toil
they don’t know heartache and strife
they will never understand the love of the soil.

But farmers and local folk make up the town
bright starry nights, the smell of gum trees
a mix of cars and shops and pastures turned brown,
there is no doubt it’s the country life for me.
    
HO ha! My friend I say do neither,simply enjoy the beauty you are gifted. It is a sad life at times for the farmer,hard work and little gain but oh,my the connetion is well worth,eh?


  granny!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2007-01-03 07:47 AM


reminds me of days gone by
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