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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-01-01 10:40 PM


My stomach clenches with worry
Words flash through my mind
Some bring smiles, some tears
I wonder when you began to look so frail

Last night?

Last night when your face collapsed
And we cried?

I want to make it all better
I want a magic wand
I want to make time go backward
I want you.

Tears burn behind my eyes
All I think of is you and I pray
In my own weird way
I reach out to a Higher Power and pray

Wanna make a deal? I ask.
If you bring her home, I’ll be good

I’ll say only nice things
I’ll smile and hug her more
I’ll take care of her
I’ll love her more

I’ll be good..
Let’s make a deal.

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© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-01-01 11:36 PM


just sending you some hugs

M

The Lady
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The Southwest
2 posted 2007-01-02 12:28 PM



oh Alison
this breaks my heart for you


wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
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Ky. USA
3 posted 2007-01-02 12:44 PM


I’ll say only nice things
I’ll smile and hug her more
I’ll take care of her
I’ll love her more

I’ll be good..
Let’s make a deal.

Little sister there are smoke prayers rising to the Four Winds for you both,my heart cries with you.
blessings!


  granny!

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-02 02:20 AM


Very hearfelt
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2007-01-02 07:27 AM


you know where I am
only a click away

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2007-01-02 10:58 AM


Sending heart hugs your way sweetie..
LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-01-02 12:09 PM


sending love, prayer and strength...


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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2007-01-02 01:04 PM


Heartfelt write, nicely done...

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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