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oblivion123
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since 2006-12-30
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0 posted 2006-12-30 10:37 AM


              Come Back baby


All day and night long its you who Im missing
Im trying to understand its meaning

I see you when im on the road riding
I see you when im sleeping
I see you when im studying
I see you when im thinking

You have invaded my thoughts and soul
Without you baby, I cant be whole
You are like a diamond in a mine of coal
Without you Baby,my life is just an empty hole

I cant wait till you come back here
all the barriers, we can clear
Fate has brought about my worst fear
and i felt what  it is like being away from you my dear

If you cant be in my life anymore
Atleast after death, we can be together im sure
Not just heart and soul,you are my core
Without you Baby ,my life isnt the same anymore

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-12-30 11:23 AM


Welcome to Passions.

Touching first post here.  Enjoyed reading your thoughts.

TD

trutodaraiders
Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
2 posted 2006-12-31 12:15 PM


Enjoyed the read. A few grammer errors. Understand the feeling of someone completing you. ~Bill
wredgranny
Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493
Ky. USA
3 posted 2006-12-31 12:58 PM


You have invaded my thoughts and soul
Without you baby, I cant be whole
You are like a diamond in a mine of coal
Without you Baby,my life is just an empty hole

Sigi Oblivio123 I am no one to say much about the thing call love,for adanvdo has never be involve but enjoy I do the beauty and softness share by you!


  granny!

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
4 posted 2006-12-31 06:53 PM




Read Mark Strand

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
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5 posted 2007-01-06 08:29 PM


Welcome to Passions... you will love it here in the blue pages!   Enjoyed your first post..  

Be Well
RDB

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