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Open Poetry #39

I Wish

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2006-12-30 09:51 AM

I WISH
I WISH
UPON A STAR
To turn back time
To where you are
So beautiful and fancy free
So much more in love with me
Where everything we say and  do
Is an adventure a search for some new clue
Expanding  things we see and how
Wanting  a fresh start now
Not without but with instead
New vision of hope inside my head
I look toward another day
And let our lives come as they may
And there-in  lies no plan ahead
Just watching for this life we’re fed
To dream of another day

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-30 10:02 AM

I know the feeling

time can be cruel

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2006-12-31 10:07 AM

It's easy to get Fed up. Nice write..Keep it up ~Bill

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

3 posted 2007-01-02 01:00 AM

New vision of hope inside my head
I look toward another day
And let our lives come as they may
And there-in lies no plan ahead
Just watching for this life we’re fed
To dream of another day

Siyo Spiked a very good thing is to test the dream,give healing time to tame the mind and lay to rest the hurt.It seems your words say you are ready to move forward,to seek again the sunshine.
blessings for your path!

granny!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-01-06 10:31 PM

Rich... keep dreaming and I'll keep reading your work ... wonderfully expressed as always
Happy New Year my sweet poet friend
RDB

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